My Purple Heart
wounded
Yesterday, rock shop
heart-shaped stones—
Valentine leftovers,
palmed a piece of fluorite.
Internal narrator spoke:
“Purple hearts are earned.”
I released it.
Internal editor reprimanded narrator
without mentioning
the war waged on me, simply showed that telling narrator
the bruises tinged with black and green
stomped into my violet heart
and placed me in my own story,
full stop in a heart-filled chamber.
Amethyst.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
I'm a subversive weirdo nerd witch who loves rocks. Intrusive rhyme bothers me. Some of my fiction may have provoked divorce proceedings in another state.😈
My words are mine. Suggest ai use and get eviscerated.
MA English literature, CofC
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Comments (5)
🌼I was wrong; this wasn't amethyst, it was fluorite. This rock deserves my deep, sincere apology! 🌼That line, "Heart shaped stones," was so resistant. Your choice of a single syllable before the six-syllable phrase felt like a water tap: letting out yet holding back. It creates a beautiful Cadence that mirrors the tension of the piece.
This is great. Short but full of so much wisdom.
Good on your internal editor.
What a lovely stone!
Oh, what a beautiful stone <3 I believe we have all earned a purple heart of this sort in one way or another <3