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The Sorriest Daisy

No more than a weed

By K.B. Silver Published about 6 hours ago 1 min read
Photo by Ellie Burgin: https://www.pexels.com/photo/dried-yellow-flowers-on-green-grass-4990587/

The sorriest daisy

Apologizing to the grass

Just for casting a shadow

Blurting bitter contrition

To the soil and

Sand

For soaking up water

With roots unbidden

Bending to the wind

With pleas of remorse

That its

Paper thin petals

Would block any flow

Stem bent and darkened

In rancorous repentance

Tendrils upended

Revealed

Deflated grey and

Nitrogen-deficient

Decrowned yellow

Head

Left battered

Devoid of petals

All blown away

In a condemnatory

Wind

K.B. Silver

Mental Healthsocial commentarysurreal poetrysad poetry

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K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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  • Silver Dauxabout 4 hours ago

    I had to take a minute after this. This was heartbreaking. And really, really touching. Absolutely gorgeous in meaning and execution. Seriously, this might be my favorite poem I've read so far this year. Wonderfully done!

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