Sedona Summit Ouch
((high-ku challenge))
By MorganaPublished 3 years ago โข Updated 3 years ago โข 1 min read
Drank the summit sun,
dancedโa cactus bit my leg.
Hobbled down, humbled.
Drank the summit sun,
dancedโa cactus bit my leg.
Hobbled down, humbled.
Comments (4)
Fabulous, simply fabulous!!!
Great poem
I like the image of the cactus biting your leg. Itโs so much more intentional than you just running into it and getting pricked. Mean cactus.
The memories this brings back :D great haiku!