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Salty Water

From sweet innocence to harsh reality.

By abbyPublished about 8 hours ago 1 min read
Salty Water
Photo by Mayank Dhanawade on Unsplash

Mummy, why does my water always taste salty?

We aren’t sea creatures

We don’t live in the saline sea

Playing with the fishes

Gurgling our mouths with water that makes our tongues burn

So why, mummy?

Why does my water always taste so salty?

Mother, why does my water always taste so salty?

It engulfs my tongue,

Almost as stinging as the demon inside me

It pierces my taste buds

Raws my emotions

Succumbs to my thoughts

Mother, why does my water always taste salty?

Mum,

What do you mean,

When you never answered my question I asked when I was 5?

Mum,

Where are you now,

Now that I can’t find you anywhere?

Mum,

Is it fun up there?

Are you okay?

Mum,

I have always loved you.

Mum,

I miss you please come back.

Liquid seeps into my mouth

Burning and blatant

With a taste i can’t ignore

Salty.

I know now mum,

I know you never wanted me to understand

The meaning behind that awful taste

Live my life in bliss

And oblivion.

But I know now mum,

Because you’re no longer here.

Because the world isn’t as sweet without you.

Now I’ll always take my water salty.

childrens poetryheartbreaksad poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

abby

hi! i’m a student and i really love writing out my thoughts and about things happening in my life. i write a lot in my notes app, so im really glad to share all my works here with the world. i hope you enjoy reading them, thank you!

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