Vocal feels a bit empty today.
There's a hole where your words should be.
And still so much left for you to say,
But you're no longer here – you're free.
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I'll miss the banter, the quips and your wit
And the “older guy” references, too.
And the way we two geezers did not give a shit
What those arrogant kids in here do.
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I'll read your emails when I need a laugh
Just to chuckle at your “schtick art”.
I can't think of a much better epitaph
For a fellow grumpy old fart.
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I'll keep on keepin' on, here in this space
'Longside others who wish you the best.
Don't fret about us, bud, we'll keep the pace,
While you get some well-deserved rest.
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About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity


Comments (6)
So sad for this deep loss for our writing community brother
Thank you for this, Dana! You said everything so perfectly and honored him well with this piece, and made me laugh, which was much needed. Such an amazing tribute! YOU are a Vocal treasure, friend! {more hearts inserted here:)}
A beautiful tribute to Jay. I shall.miss his insightful comments on my stories, some of which were more thought provoking than what I'd originally written .
This is a wonderful tribute to Jay. May his soul rest in peace ❤️
Beautiful ❤️🩹 🥹R.I.P 🕊 🕊 🕊
Thank you so very much- jk