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her eyes are bright blue

What Comes Back

By KodahPublished about 4 hours ago 1 min read

*PLEASE LISTEN TO THE SOUND WHILE YOU READ MY POEM

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Growing up

Well, only I was growing up at the time...

but

Growing up

I remember watching my younger sister slowly lose herself

not all at once

but in pieces, no one else seemed to notice

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She was slowly losing her hair

her body grew frail

her skin turned pale

her body was trying to leave

but her eyes... refused to go with it

~her eyes were bright blue~

with fragments of green

her eyes still held the universe

even when her body felt like it was collapsing into nothing...

~

I begged time to slow down

but I saw a universe learning to say goodbye...

she died... but those eyes, remained somewhere secretive

Those eyes stopped showing me the future

and started showing reflections of everything I was about to lose

but not forever~

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No matter how much it took from her,

it would never learn how to take her from me

I want her to know that I don't remember a girl who lost all her hair and had a version of her being stolen away

I remember her as the little girl

bright blue eyes

with fragments of green

who believed

she would grow up

and be something

beautiful~

~

When I gave birth to my first child at twenty-seven

My daughter opened her eyes

her eyes are bright blue

with fragments of green

She came back to me~

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Hii <3 I missed you all! This is just a story, but it's also real for so many! This challenge is more creative and fun to me! I love you all, life has been lifying recently!!

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About the Creator

Kodah

- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical

~𝓢𝓽𝓸𝓻𝓲𝓮𝓼 𝓬𝓪𝓷 𝓫𝓮 𝓪 𝓵𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓵𝓮 𝓭𝓮𝓮𝓹~

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred about 2 hours ago

    Sadly beautiful and beautifully sad, but mostly beautiful. The music reminds me a little of Terry Riley

  • Mariann Carrollabout 2 hours ago

    This is so beautiful. I really hope this win Kodah 🏆 💓💞💕💟

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