Azaleas
in Augusta
By Harper LewisPublished about 20 hours ago • Updated about 7 hours ago • 1 min read
circling the golf course like a vulture,
I light near a lover,
fly through pretension to the packy,
hug a fantastic neck and give a book.
On to my mom’s, back across the river.
Camellias, incense, and bogus kitsch,
Garnets and birds.
I crossed the the river a third time,
paused for a beer and a bite before
flying away back to my lover
to steal a kiss, jittery as a schoolgirl,
Floored by what still stands all these decades later.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
I'm a subversive weirdo nerd witch who loves rocks. Intrusive rhyme bothers me. Some of my fiction may have provoked divorce proceedings in another state.😈
My words are mine. Suggest ai use and get eviscerated.
MA English literature, CofC


Comments (3)
Wow. You packed every single line to the maximum. There wasn’t a line you didn’t know what was happening or where you could instantly visualize what was happening. Being able to pull that off with opaque broad brush lines is entirely impressive.
You indeed fly through the pretension. Good one. 🤗
Looks like a fun day for you. 😊