The Cave Part 11
Darkness, and the countless points of light, as if the entire void beyond was filled with the fire of a million stars. I felt as if I was staring into the eternity of a night sky beyond those wooden doors, the place beyond the actual reality, while I stood behind a curtain of scenery, the mountain and sky a mere pretense. And in that void beyond of unfathomable space, there hung suspended a mighty shard of crystal floating in place, with hundreds of a far smaller chunks orbiting around it in balanced but intersecting circles, no two in the same path. These caught the light from the center, and sparkled with inner fire each.
Comments (7)
Short but contain volumes of wisdom!
Simple and lovely.
Truer words have never been said. This is a great haiku!
Short but weighty—like a golden nugget of wisdom! This one carries the quiet power of self-worth, reminding us that generosity starts from within. Simple, yet profoundly enriching! 💖😊
Word 💯. Big facts, such a good message. Love your Haiku.
So true. We cannot pour from an empty cup. Loved your poem!
So thought- provoking, and simple at the same time. Nice job here! 😊❤️